Yax
Ancient Mariner
I think the problem is that the chorus would work better as a different section. Like an outro or something, like in The Wicker Man. It needs a more memorable chorus. It's still a good song though, with great riffage.
edit: And it's growing on me. But I agree that it needs to be more memorable.
edit: And it's growing on me. But I agree that it needs to be more memorable.
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