Yax
Ancient Mariner
I think the problem is that the chorus would work better as a different section. Like an outro or something, like in The Wicker Man. It needs a more memorable chorus. It's still a good song though, with great riffage. 
edit: And it's growing on me. But I agree that it needs to be more memorable.
				
			edit: And it's growing on me. But I agree that it needs to be more memorable.
			
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 In British universities 40% is the pass mark for undergraduates. My first university gave a D for above 40, C for above 50, B for above 60 and A for above 70. My second university didn't give grades, just tells us the percentages.
 In British universities 40% is the pass mark for undergraduates. My first university gave a D for above 40, C for above 50, B for above 60 and A for above 70. My second university didn't give grades, just tells us the percentages.