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Ancient Mariner
God no.
"I had the lyrics and melodies all worked out"
Dickinson would never write such a piece of crap.
Is it the subject matter of the lyrics that you think are crap or the lyrics as a whole?
Obviously, I don't agree with the religious clap trap in the lyrics but I think the ideas he has are expressed succinctly and are pretty good for a guy's first attempt at lyric writing. This probably is due to Bruce editing them.