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[Perun]

Spider, spider burning bright
In the bedroom of the night

 

[Ariana]

Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

 

[Perun]

When the stars threw down their spears,
And water'd heaven with their tears,
Did He smile His work to see?
Did He who made our Saap make thee?

Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

Check your metre.

 

[Ariana]

It's fine.

 

[Perun]

I guess something is boring if it's too perfect...

 

[Ariana]

You're not reading it properly.

 

[Perun]

Is it not ˘ ˘¯ ¯ ˘ ˘¯ in the first verse, and ˘ ˘¯ ¯ ˘¯ in the second?

 

[Saapanael]

Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

Good thing about winter is that the eight-leggers die of cold and starvation.

Perun's right, it's not maths, anyone can see your poem is wrong .

 

[Ariana]

It's /* /* / / /
/ */* / /

And I'm allowed to skip the last syllable.

 

[Perun]

Who gave you permis?

 

[Ariana]

I did.

 

[Perun]

You are quite reckless.

 

[Moon Child]

What about snakes? I know Ariana LOVES those.

 

[Perun]

 

[Moon Child]

Classic.

 

[Ariana]

What about snakes? I know Ariana LOVES those.

I though we were friends. No more.

You are quite reckless.

Live fast, die young.

 

[MrKnickerbocker]

 

[Perun]

Live fast, die young.

Nothing beats being awesome.

 

[Travis The Dragon]

You all be crazy and silly!

 

[Travis The Dragon]