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Perun · Oct 9, 2013

Spider, spider burning bright
In the bedroom of the night

Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

When the stars threw down their spears,
And water'd heaven with their tears,
Did He smile His work to see?
Did He who made our Saap make thee?

Ariana said:
Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

Check your metre.

Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

It's fine. <_<

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

I guess something is boring if it's too perfect... :halo:

Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

You're not reading it properly. :nonono:

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

Is it not ˘ ˘¯ ¯ ˘ ˘¯ in the first verse, and ˘ ˘¯ ¯ ˘¯ in the second?

Saapanael · Oct 9, 2013

Ariana said:
Crawling slowly up Saap's leg
Let us hear him now beg

Good thing about winter is that the eight-leggers die of cold and starvation.

Perun's right, it's not maths, anyone can see your poem is wrong

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Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

It's /* /* / / /
/ */* / /

And I'm allowed to skip the last syllable.

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

Who gave you permis?

Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

I did.

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

You are quite reckless.

Moon Child · Oct 9, 2013

What about snakes? I know Ariana LOVES those.

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

Moon Child · Oct 9, 2013

Classic.

Ariana · Oct 9, 2013

Moon Child said:
What about snakes? I know Ariana LOVES those.

I though we were friends. No more.

Perun said:
You are quite reckless.

Live fast, die young.

MrKnickerbocker · Oct 9, 2013

Perun · Oct 9, 2013

Ariana said:
Live fast, die young.

Nothing beats being awesome.

Travis The Dragon · Oct 9, 2013

You all be crazy and silly! :nuts:

Travis The Dragon · Oct 9, 2013