Final thoughts on
Systematic Chaos...
Constant Motion - Pummeling music, great drums, Metallica-worship vocals. Portnoy is too loud. I feel like the transition with the wishy-washy chords going into the chorus is rather dull. It builds like a 90’s rap-rock song. Chorus is solid, but again - Portnoy’s vocals are too loud. That small vocal bridge section is the coolest part of the song (“obsessive yearning…”). We get our first Portnoy “UGH!” Real nice, Mike. Fits real well.
Forsaken - I actually really love this song. It’s not perfect, but it’s definitely my third favorite on the album. Call me crazy, but I love when Dream Theater writes these concise, goal-driven song. LaBrie sounds really good, the guitars and bass are simple but incredibly powerful, and I love Jordan’s piano work. Vampire lyrics don’t bother me.
Repentance - The groove is actually rather cool and I don’t mind the slow, droning pace. Everything is fine for 5 minutes. LaBrie sounds nice, the solo sounds nice, nothing is particularly great but it’s nice enough. This could have made a decent little mellow section of the 12-step suite. Unfortunately the entire second half of the song is worthless. Self-indulgent, poorly-acted radio drama that follows a loose theme and does not focus on the actual theme - alcoholism. I get that it relates, but it doesn’t work. Why this album is so obsessed with hearing people talk, I’ll never know. Plus, Akerfeldt's voice is so hilariously specific that it takes me right out of the song.
The Dark Eternal Night - The riffs, holy hell the riffs! What an amazing piece of heavy metal. Portnoy’s drums are perfectly synched with everything and it works really well. Unfortunately - the vocals are not great. LaBrie should not be singing on this song, Portnoy is too loud and also doesn’t have the conviction in his voice to deliver the melodies. This is something that should be on a new Symphony X album. Russell Allen would absolutely slay this song. The lyrics are also terribly arranged. “His. Most. Shock. Ing. Mysteries.” There’s just no ear for the flow of a melody during those verses. The chorus is good, though, and as I said, the music is simply astounding. Best heavy riffing they’ve done since ToT. Too bad about the vocals. I dig the hell out of the HP Lovecraft-lifted lines, though.
Prophets of War - Muse worship. The lyrics are good on LaBrie’s part, but the song is such a production onslaught that I cannot appreciate it. It sounds forced, weird, and ultimately poorly conceived. The fan-shouting section is bizarre and mixed poorly. They’ve got 60 people chanting and it sounds like 6. Portnoy’s absolutely horrendous rap-talk section is the worst part of the entire album. His vocals even cover up LaBrie’s best vocal on the album - “a change from what it’s been!” at the end. Easily the worst song on the album.
The Ministry of Lost Souls - An emotional tour de force. It builds so slowly, but it does so with quality melodies and by the time the musical break kicks in it feels earned. I think the instrumental goes on for too long, but I don’t find it “unnecessary” the way that others do. This is one hell of a song. The live version on Chaos in Motion has an incredibly raw, emotional vocal performance from JLB (unfortunately Petrucci’s guitar is out of tune).
In The Presence of Enemies - A simply amazing song. The first half is just perfect Dream Theater and the second is wicked as hell. It reaches a level of darkness and malevolence I didn’t know was capable from this band. It reaches Opeth levels of malevolence. I could do without the talking parts - why are they covering up everything LaBrie sings?! - but they aren’t frequent enough to ruin the song.
Systematic Chaos has both grown on me and infuriated me more over the last week. It’s better than I remember it being, despite having so many things wrong with it. Octavarium hinted at the cracks, SC shows them unabashedly, and BC&SL is a broken wall.
A lot of the album sounds like production tricks - mostly due to the vocals. The songs aren’t written for LaBrie (except for Ministry and Forsaken), they are written for Portnoy (or James Hetfield). I actually enjoy the live versions of some of these songs better, like Constant Motion and TDEN, because LaBrie is as loud as he should be. I don’t understand why Portnoy’s chaingang tuff guyz are mixed louder than the lead fucking singer. I know that Petrucci wrote the majority of the lyrics on this album, but it sounds like a bunch of melodies conceived by Portnoy. Even in the making of documentary you can hear Portnoy dictating how LaBrie should sing the songs. It’s interesting that their previous heavier album (Train of Thought), sounds much more natural for LaBrie. Also, this was recorded after a long break, so I can’t blame his performance on lack of rest - it’s clearly a conceptual issue.
The biggest issue with this album is also its greatest strength: Mike Portnoy. His drumming is absolutely insane on this album, at turns restrained, mature, and clever or insanely over-the-top with technicality. Unfortunately, his vocal dominance ruins so many songs. The guy actually has a good voice, a very good voice - for a backup singer. He sings (and writes) like a drummer, the most important thing is the rhythmic and melodic accuracy, not the delivery. His staccato lyrics (and Petrucci's staccato lyrics) on Constant Motion, Prophets, and TDEN sound and read like notes on a piece of paper - zero emotion. Or rather: feigned emotion. In fact, there it is, the issue with this album: it tries too hard. It feels forced. It feels overthought and underfelt. Even the great songs (and there are two) seem to be lacking personality.
Oh well, ya can’t like ‘em all. I can’t wait for the next album, which I had previously considered to be the worst in the entire discography.