Thanks! But also... that section is bizarre. It just takes me out of the whole vibe.
You have this heartfelt, cold, empty-feeling metal ballad about a guy on the road missing his wife. Beautiful pre-chorus, then a big bombastic (if not a tad nu-metal) chorus. The riff at 4:54 is solid, and I like the eventual chaotic keyboard line above it. But then at 5:30 you can hear the beginnings of the section devolving into typical atonal Dream Theater wankery, and at 5:43 it becomes full-blown atonal Dream Theater wankery. To make matters worse, at 6:28 Jordan gets his say for some reason and adds extra layers of atonal Dream Theater wankery to a point where the song is no longer about missing your wife and all about going to the carnival with your buds while drunk out of your mind. And the carnival is in space. And you're probably high, too, because why not?
It sucks all the feeling and loneliness from the song and replaces it with classic Dream Theater out-of-left-field "my guitar is bigger than yours" fuckery. My superior edited version of the song cuts the entire section from 5:30 to 7:47, and while I don't love the section at 7:47, at 8:06 the song picks back up again and never disappoints.
I used to love Dream Theater; they're the band that got me playing a 6-string bass. Train of Thought is probably my favorite album by them. But the musical masturbation in this song is just too much considering the subject matter. The solos don't fit and reek of Petrucci going "Hey guys, we need a couple extra minutes in this emo song about me missing my wife, so... shred fest?!" Jordan: "But of course, what a novel idea!" Portnoy: "Fuck yeah bro!" Myung: " ... "
Train of Thought from best to worst:
1. In the Name of God
2. Honor Thy Father
3. Stream of Consciousness
4. This Dying Soul
5. As I Am
6. Endless Sacrifice
7. Vacant
Thanks for the substantial reply.
There are two concerns, the thematic and musical.
As for the theme, I can't say anything more or less than as someone who is deeply affected by being for an even single night away from my wife, I can't even imagine going on tour and leaving her behind, with that I do not only find the lyrics to the song not cringy at all, but I feel the rather dark and oppressive (not to mention progressively building up in intensity) instrumental part to be also a comment of sorts, saying a lot which sometimes even the words don't.
I could go further and look at the subtext and themes beyond the mere textual significance of the song (*cough,
applicability), but I won't, I just can't help but say that for what it tries to say (even musically, in this case), it says it very well, IMHO, in fact, it says it better than some other tracks by them. (Heck, Stream of Consciousness isn't much stream-of-consciousness-y
at all, in fact the instrumental part of Endless Sacrifice would be more fitting for that title, but that's my next point).
I'm not sure what exactly consists of "wankery" and I feel the term is overused and abused and mainly used for "instrumental parts that I don't like" (I'm not attacking you in particular, mind). Dance of Eternity is the ultimate wankery, which has absolutely no reason to be there, but it is very beloved. The original Metropolis is pure wankery, mainly because the song just tries to show off and stops caring about any semblance of structure - and yet again, it is beloved by many.
My point is that I like to try and find out if there is anything about that individual "wankery" that contrasts it against other examples of such and makes me enjoy it.
So, for example, both the "tickle sections" on ToT - the closing minute of This Dying Soul and the similar section in In the Name of God beginning at 8:37 - might just look like meaningless noodlings where Trucci and Rudess play as fast as they can without even any particularly strong melody...
...BUT... underneath this, each time, is absolutely the sweetest, the grooviest bass section DT EVER did.
You could just concentrate on the bass in the TDS ending and groove out in a really cool swagger dance. It absolutely holds the sound together and helps me get over the fact that Trucci and Rudess have just decided to show off and helps sell the fact that this particular track ends in similarly intense way as it begins, otherwise (I mean, as for the edgy teen "cool factor", both the way TDS begins and ends rule supreme)
Just as in the ITNOG section, Myung brings out this middle-Eastern harmony (if I'm hearing it right) that not only fits the theme of the track, but again, adds some more sense to the sound and makes that part rather enjoable for me, even if many dislike it.
So, back to Endless - this section (and I'm saying this solemnly, seriously, even if off the top of my head - I might be mistaken, therere might be others) might be the smoothest, most consistently
fluent passage in the whole DT discography. There are a lot of examples where they don't care particularly much about this consistency. Many prog tracks, even by them, don't make a lot of "sense" (*cough A Change of Seasons *cough - the second part, the beginning is just as fluent as ES)
To this day, hundreds of listens later, I am still fascinated at how each and every section somehow results from the previous one, harmonically, rhythmically, call/answer (or thesis/antithesis, to not overuse already overused musical terms I'm not 100 % sure I use correctly).
It just feels so ridiculously natural, with the added bonus of raising the intensity throughout, until it culminates in the insanely thrilling ascending part at 8:26 and in that final vocal section, entering in with the strained, jolting, frustrated
"Over the distance..." etc.
Like I said, it reminds me of a literal stream of consciousness, of a perfect encapsulation of a wandering and frustrated mind (like one being forced to do menial things while I would rather just be joking and laughing and having philosophical conversation with my beloved) and emotionally, it is one of the greatest things DT ever could create for me.
With that in mind, that overhated 6:28 part is just a joke, an alien, a single drop of otherness, a random brain fart of silliness that kinda breaks the linearity (that would be too much) and makes some circles on the water. In fact, even thematically, what you say
the song is no longer about missing your wife and all about going to the carnival with your buds while drunk out of your mind. And the carnival is in space. And you're probably high, too, because why not?
is ultimately fitting. Because I've been there. Not at a carnival, not in space, not high, but... you get what I mean, right?
You could also take it as indeed a "circus" moment, a commentary on the "circus" of a tour, fans, groupies, sycophants, neon signs and air conditionings, while you would give a million, a billion dollars to be home by the fire, reading a nice book and your wife drifting off next to you.
And the King Crimson quotation at about 5:55 is just as random, but seamlessly inserted, I just love jokes like that.
Now, I know I won't magically make you like it, it's just this insane feel of
fluency, of development, of
progression, which I would have expected you to appreciate deeply and was indeed perplexed that you didn't.
(gee, I have this feeling that
@Diesel 11 will probably love this post
)