My lyrics,

[Anonymous]

hey, just want to show you some lyrics i caem up with, i personally feel they are pretty good, and would just like to get your views on them weather they are good or bad [!--emo&--][img src=\'style_emoticons/[#EMO_DIR#]/smile.gif\' border=\'0\' style=\'vertical-align:middle\' alt=\'smile.gif\' /][!--endemo--]

Favorite song

Sin Stalker

Women of the day
Women of the night
Get in stay out of sight
He’ll find you
He’ll grind you
He’ll make you bleed
Hell plant in you his pleasure seed

He’s the sin stalker, and he lives for sin
He’s the sin stalker, and he’ll pull you in

Children stay in
Don’t go out to play
Something evil is on the way
He’ll find you
He’ll grind you
He’ll make you bleed
Is he of human breed?

He’s the sin stalker, and he lives for sin
He’s the sin stalker, and he’ll pull you in

He comes from here
He comes from there
He comes from a land of everywhere
Fears no man or immortal soul
This year is his and he’s taking toll

Don’t look into his eyes
They’ll take you under
Better start running when you hear the thunder
He’s black, he’s red
He’s for you to dread

He’ll find you
He’ll grind you
He’ll make you bleed
No mercy
No remorse
A stolen soul, is all he’ll need
He’s the sin stalker and he loves to sin
He’s the sin stalker and he play’s to win
The sin stalker, he’ll pull you in

 

[Anonymous]

this is another one of my songs, ill post a total of 4 songs wich i have written down onto my computer from my rough drafts of paper i have came up with,

this one is called In The Heat of the City

When the sun goes down
The night turns black
In the heat of the city
You better watch your back

You take the flashing lights
Will all the street fights
It’s a fast life
If you get stabbed by somebody’s knife
Many don’t approve or couldn’t care less
In the heat of the city
It’s a life that’s true
In the heat of the city, things aren’t pretty
In the heat of the city, its all nitty gritty

Jacked up, cracked up
No way out
In the heat of the city
You’ve lost all doubt
In the heat of the city
Its hard to stay alive
In the heat of the city
The strong survive

Pimps and dealers making the cash
Skids and squealers taking the crash
In the heat of the city, things aren’t pretty
In the heat of the city, it’s all nitty gritty
And endless job at the corner of main
Busting the ladies who are selling
Mothers crying from the bitter shame
In the heat of the city
Who or what’s to blame

When the sun goes down
The night turns black
In the heat of the city
You better watch your back

Jacked up, cracked up
No way out
In the heat of the city
You’ve lost all doubt
In the heat of the city
Its crime after crime
In the heat of the city
There’s so little time

 

[Anonymous]

ill save the rest untill i get some views on the lyrics [!--emo&:rock:--][img src=\'style_emoticons/[#EMO_DIR#]/headbang.gif\' border=\'0\' style=\'vertical-align:middle\' alt=\'headbang.gif\' /][!--endemo--]

 

[Anonymous]

ok well not getting any replies [!--emo&--][img src=\'style_emoticons/[#EMO_DIR#]/sad.gif\' border=\'0\' style=\'vertical-align:middle\' alt=\'sad.gif\' /][!--endemo--]

so ill put up some of my other lyrics and maybe it might inspire you to write somthing about my lyrics [!--emo&--][img src=\'style_emoticons/[#EMO_DIR#]/biggrin.gif\' border=\'0\' style=\'vertical-align:middle\' alt=\'biggrin.gif\' /][!--endemo--]


The Evil One

Golden stars light up the endless sky
Before morning they all die
Black clouds eclipse the sun
Thunder and lightning strikes the earth
This is the day that you gave birth

From your spawning seed he was born
To control the world he has sworn
Last one in the race
His soul a horrible face
The evil one
The evil one is your son
What have you done?
You better run
The evil one
The evil one is your son

He’ll take from you your love and faith
Better leave now there is no escape
Don’t fight the beast
Don’t get a priest
Satan will call for your death bed feast
What have you done?
You better run
The evil one is your son

Ye what have you done
You better run
The evil one is your son

Ye what have you done
You better run
The evil one is your son

Down the trail hear the wind
Blowing through the trees
The man in black rises up
To catch the earthly breeze

Black cold spirits in his soul
There something in the air
The smell of death breaks his way
You know he won’t play fair




Pitch black figure coming now
Hear the thunder roar
Ice cold breeze
You’re on your knees
You see the open door

You better run run run
The evil one is your son
No mistake in what you’ve done
The evil one is your son


and another one is Black World

Big on small
We hear that survival voice call
Fight to stay alive
Steal to survive
It’s a fight beast against beast
Man on man
Each on each
It’s a black world
We all live in
It’s a black world
There’s no winning
Can’t stop sinning

Money made the world of power
Money calls, people devour
No race is more unreal
To kill, lie, cheat and steal
Fighting from there birth in time
Feelings of nature and why is it a crime

It’s a black world
We all live in
It’s a black world
There’s no winning
Can’t stop sinning

The bible of fraud
The devil of con
Your belief in religion should be gone
It’s a black world
Never getting brighter
It’s a black world
Cause your born to be a fighter

It’s a black world
We all live in
It’s a black world
There’s no winning
Can’t stop sinning


Please tell me what you think, im currently playing the guitar and seriously considering making a band, as its always been a dream of mine, i would just like to have some out put on my lyrics and get some one elses point of view thanks

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