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Here's my first song lyric. It's inspirated by both maiden and Bruce ( I know, some parts of the chorus comes from Paschendale) and I think it's qute good actually. Now i'd like some opinions. Positive things as well as criticism. And plese, please if you feel for some reason you want to delete this topic, please tell me why. I can't see the lyric as offensive or anything. It's just a lyric about evil.
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The Evils Role In This Cruel World
Verse
The hearts of mankind are filled with a lust for vengeance.
When the hate grows it morphs into pure evil.
The shadow in your heart is rises, you’ll choose between good and dark.
between the hidden truth or the obvious lies!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Verse
It’s like a snake. Manipulating.
always growing and twists the mind.
Raping! Taunting!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Verse
Lying awake at night just waiting for the evil to strike.
Striking the mind when the defences are down the Evil shall rise once again!
The Plague that’s inside us all will be unleached and the worlds doom shall come!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Evil! Evil! EEEEEEVIL!
Rock on
The Evils Role In This Cruel World
Verse
The hearts of mankind are filled with a lust for vengeance.
When the hate grows it morphs into pure evil.
The shadow in your heart is rises, you’ll choose between good and dark.
between the hidden truth or the obvious lies!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Verse
It’s like a snake. Manipulating.
always growing and twists the mind.
Raping! Taunting!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Verse
Lying awake at night just waiting for the evil to strike.
Striking the mind when the defences are down the Evil shall rise once again!
The Plague that’s inside us all will be unleached and the worlds doom shall come!
Chorus
Cruelty has a human heart! The evil surely plays it part!
Is the world light or dark?
Or just evil!
Evil! Evil! EEEEEEVIL!