Please help me to write my cover letter

[VJ]

Hello guys,

I am french and I try to export myself in the United States But I am encountering a few problems writing my cover letter. Can you help me to correct it ?

First of all, what do you think of this sentence ?


Is it grammatically good ? What would you change in it ?

Second, is this sentence correct :

[date].

Thank you


PS : I was serious

 

[Onhell]

may I suggest: http://www.homestarrunner.com/sbemail64.html

 

[Wästed The Great]

Phew, I was worried that Onhell was going to provide suggestions for writing a cover letter. 

 

[Onhell]

 

[LooseCannon]

Onhell.  Behave.

 

[Onhell]

No need to warn me, that was as far as I was going to take it. I read the "new" rules

 

[SinisterMinisterX]

PS : I was serious

Then you came to the wrong place, bub.

Don't say I didn't warn you.

 

[Cornfed Hick]

Did somebody edit VJ's original post, because his quotes don't contain anything.  If this is just BS spam, then so be it, the mods can shut this down.  If he truly is serious, then we're not being very hospitable -- although, VJ: it is impossible to respond if there is nothing to evaluate.