Rime of the Ancient Mariner - vocals transcription

[Marbled in Stone]

Hi

I've transcribed the vocal track of Rime of the Ancient Mariner but I'm not sure if it's completely correct. I have most problems with "day after day" part, it's weird how certain words and phrasing make the pitch hard to recognize (at least for me). Can you check if it's transcribed right? Also, if you find errors in other parts, please let me know.

 

[CriedWhenBrucieLeft]

No. But you can check the lyrics yourself here:
http://ironmaidencommentary.com/?url=album05_powerslave/lyrics05_powerslave&lang=eng&link=albums
Plus, are they not printed inside the album sleeve anyway?

 

[Marbled in Stone]

Sorry, maybe I didn't make myself clear. I mean vocal melodies, not lyrics (though you would've known if you'd checked the attached file).