Rime of the Ancient Mariner - vocals transcription

Hi :)

I've transcribed the vocal track of Rime of the Ancient Mariner but I'm not sure if it's completely correct. I have most problems with "day after day" part, it's weird how certain words and phrasing make the pitch hard to recognize (at least for me). Can you check if it's transcribed right? Also, if you find errors in other parts, please let me know.
 

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