The Trooper Vocal Cover - Suggestions/Critique?

[KaiTrooper]

Hey guys, can you give me some feedback on my cover of The Trooper? I've only recorded half the vocals so far (there's nothing after the solo).

I'm recording off my ipod, so sound quality is shit, but it's the best I can do for now

Thanks in advance guys!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jmJ-cEh5 ... r_embedded

 

[DJ James]

I'm not much of a vocal critic but I have been in band for quite a few years. Try and hit those high notes of course and try to give a edgyness to your voice. Besides that, not too bad.

 

[edge of darkness]

I was good not great. Not bad at all.